Hi, Ardith Hinton!
I read your message from 03.05.2015 23:46

Thank you and Dallas for comments. As I understood, it is indeed impossible to
retell the part after "or" in other way than it is. 
I tried, but it was not probably a very good attempt. 

-----Beginning of the citation-----
This had impelled Tyler to begin a letter pointing out that Dog
was undoubtedly rabid, certainly a danger to the community, and
should be put down for the General Good, until his wife had
reminded him that glowing red eyes weren't a symptom of rabies,
or, for that matter, anything seen outside of the kind of film
that neither of the Tylers would be caught dead at but knew all
they needed to know about, thank you very much.
----- The end of the citation -----

This had impelled Tyler to begin a letter pointing out that Dog was undoubtedly
 rabid, certainly a danger to the community, and should be put down for the
General Good, until his wife had reminded him that dog's red eyes weren't a
symptom of rabies as it wasn't anything outside of modern dissolute movies,
that the Tylers would never see again, even if they would be paid for that.

Bye, Ardith!
Alexander Koryagin
english_tutor 2015

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