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alexander | All | Singing and punctuation markss |
July 6, 2018 10:01 PM * |
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From: alexander koryagin <koryagin@newmail.ru> Hi All! In my translation I have these lines (here a teacher of music (Paul knows him ;-) is checking the boy's faculty for music): -----Beginning of the citation----- "What will you sing? Tell me!" "I don't know the name...." "Well, we'll see. You start it, and I'll find the melody." Maxim started, and probably, he was not very good: Bonfire is barely glowing And darkness has covered the camp. The guitar overtook his voice, and it became easier. But it was such a song that must be sung properly if you start to sing it at all. Because it seems at once that danger is everywhere around, and very soon everybody will rush to attack. No time to unsaddle our horses And sing some songs at day's end... Further on Maxim didn't know himself how he sang. But, apparently, his voice sounded clear and with emotion because the words of that song were alarming and clear themselves: This frail scary silence Cannot be described in verse The hammers in the rebels' rifles Cocked like their nerves... ----- The end of the citation ----- I was told by one guy that the words of the song should be taken in quotation marks. Like this: Maxim started, and probably, he was not very good: "Bonfire is barely glowing And darkness has covered the camp." etc Should I do it or the indentation of the song's words is enough? Bye All! --- ifmail v.2.15dev5.4 * Origin: NPO RUSnet InterNetNews site (2:5020/400) |
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