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From: "alexander koryagin" <koryagin@newmail.ru>

F2EP
Hi, mark lewis! How are you?
on Thursday, 28 of June, I read your message to Roy Witt
about "Earth or the Earth"


 ak>>> [...In reality, women use Chanel perfume to attract men. And men's
 ak>>> cheap cologne attracts women]

 RW>>> ...Women use Chanel perfume to attract, while women succumb to
 RW>>> ...cheap men's cologne.

 ml>> "cheap men" or "cheap cologne"?
 RW>> "men's" implys ownership...

IMHO "men's" can serve as an adjective.

 ml> yes and "cheap" can be a modifier of "men" or "cologne"...

 ml>> Women use Chanel to attract but succumb to men's cheap cologne.

 RW>> Both your and my versions are correct...

 ml> and mine is short enough to make a tagline from 

Here is another variant, which IMHO smoother:
Women spend heaps of money buying Chanel, but finally succumb to cheap colone.

[...My smiler has temporarily broken]
Bye mark!
Alexander (yAlexKo[]yandex.ru) + 2:5020/2140.91
fido7.english-tutor 2012 


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