Recently Alexander Koryagin wrote in a message to Roy Witt:

 DM>  I wonder what the cats are thinking, when during washing

 DM>  suddenly freeze and a few seconds looking into nothingness?


 IS>  And the answer is, obviously: What the pain in the neck is
                                             ^^^^ ^^ ^^^ ^^^^
 IS>  stooping like this!


           BTW, Ivan... good use of colloquial metaphor!  I interpret this as a
 figure of speech which can also be read quite literally, thus making it a
"live metaphor" and reminding your audience how it came to be.  After alI these
 years I still have the notes I hastily scribbled when a certain teacher
remarked e.g. that the French say "put that in your pocket & your moustache
also" whereas I'd say "put that in your pipe & smoke it".  AFAIC it is amusing
in both languages, perhaps because I hear it as a cheerfully irreverent [esp.
Brit.] way of saying "think about it".  I understand why folks from Russia
enjoy such trivia as much as I do.  I'd say "what a pain", however, in this
context.  "What a" is another idiomatic expression which people often use
without conscious analysis....  :-)



 RW>  The best I can figure is that part before the first comma.


           It follows the subject + predicate pattern we're accustomed to...

                   I wonder
                   cats are thinking

... but the next clause is incomplete.  The addition of "they", which Alexander
 suggested, is enough to fix the problem of the missing subject.  Now we have

                   they freeze.


So far, so good.  I see another word missing, though.  (Hang in there, Denis...
 we're nearly done!)  "Looking" is a participle.  It can't be used as a verb
all by itself.  There are various ways in which one might solve this problem,
but I think Alexander's idea of using the present tense of "[to] look" would
probably be the quickest & easiest for those who are not native speakers of
English.  My initial thoughts involved adding a word or two.  On second
thoughts, however, I realized other folks might expect me to be able to parse
my own examples.  :-))



ak>  I believe the correct version is this:


           Yes!!!  What you're doing is paraphrasing what somebody else said...
 i.e. expressing your understanding of what he meant in your own words.  You
can thus model correct usage whilst giving him an opening to explain, if
necessary, how your perception(s) could use a bit of fine-tuning.

           Give yourself two or three gold stars.  ;-)




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